Friday, January 11, 2008
"If" Summary
This poem stood out to me mostly because of the subject matter and personal connection. The poem tells about certain characteristics that someone needs in order to be a man. it connects with me beccause I feel that all of the traits listed made a lot of sence and if I can do and think most of those things than I could have an almost perfect outlook on life. It is the most relivant for me becasue I am at the stage in my life inbetween childhood and adulthood, and the poem's advise can help me become a man if I apply it to my life.
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Beccause, sense, and becasue aren't really words dude. I think what your trying to say is good but all i was doing was laughing at your spelling the whole time to pay attention. Have a nice day
Jason,
that post sounded like it came from your heart and it really touched you. Adolescence is the time between adulthood and childhood and thats the time when you find out who you are. I hope this poem does wonders for you.
dude your amazingly smart you did a great job on this cause this is great!!!!!!!!!
Besides the couple of spelling errors that are present in your post it is still well thought out. I think everyone is always looking for advice since we are as you said in between childhood and adulthood. I'm not exactly sure what the traits are that you found in the poem but at the same time I see that they obviously meant something to you. For you to say that with those traits you can have an almost perfect outlook on life then it could have been good advice. So overall it is a good post you just might want to think about fixing the couple errors that are present.
Personal connection sounds sexy. I think you chose this poem because you feel you want these certain characteristics for being a man. I read this one also and I thought it was good but couldn't remember what it said when I got back to my desk. One day you might be a man, but the surgery might cost a lot. Awesome job! One day Jason! One Day!
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Jason!
Man you had some type O's. LOL it was a good job coming from your heart. I am with you on this poem. Its like the poem is telling you the building blocks to become a man.
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